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After reading the few pages from They Say/ I Say I felt like I could pin point exactly lots of transitions, key terms. pointing terms and repetition in my paper, when really that’s not what happened.. I didn’t realize that my paper could be hard to follow but could be fixed with a few words. I used some repetition with the words distractions, and attention which would be expected since those are two key words that are vital to my paper. I definitely lack transition words and points terms. It’s not as if I need to add more sentences maybe a couple but now knowing what examples of transition words and point terms are I definitely use them to my advantage to make my writing connect a little better.
Yay! It sounds like this was a helpful exercise for you!